Caligula's Launderette

I love you Brad, but you already know that. The imagery is amazing, and the allusions and such make it that much richer. I think this has to be one ...

Hello Remember, I don't believe we have properly met, I go by CL or Cal around here, and this is how this crit will go, I'll tell you what I ...

Beautiful as always, hon. I am torn between telling you that you need more punctuation in the second stanza, and telling you it's fine the way it is. How about ...

*snicker snicker* Am I going to have to show up again and point out the obvious? Love it, Grif. It's just so entertaining. :D

Heehee, Claudette that's the way we do things around here- *pokes then hugs Cassandra*. One thing I caught: Everytime there is dialogue it should be a new paragraph, i.e. paragraph ...

That is fantastic! Saphirus, Tov, Imp, and Crysi all in one, it couldn't get any better. :P I love how tangible everything is, how you have crafted things in such ...

Heyla Dreamy, Shall we begin on my Chair crit, eh? So this is how it works, cause my handwriting is near illegible on these things, instead of scanning it in ...

Hmm... interesting beginning. First you have some formating issues; it should read like this-- Drip. Drip. Drop-drip. She had never thought of Chinese water torture as actually effective, but this ...

Nice, beauteous imagery Gyr, but there are things that would make this poem even better, first: punctuation. As Bob would say - DO THE PUNCT! Right now the poem is ...

Heyla Niamh, I realized as I was going along, reading and criting your story that a. my handwriting illegible, and b. I did most things in short hand, thus it ...

Fern Gully on crack, I love it. *huggles smaur* And for some odd reason I kept wanting to call August, Mr. Wednesday. :shock: I really like how you use passive ...

So okay, shoot me, I forgot to bring my crit for this again. But I wanted to touch on a few things first. 1. Detail dumping: You have a tendency ...

Heehee! I read the entire trilogy on vacay in Ireland, took me less than a business week. Cery just has bad luck with women - real bad luck. Sonea gesturing ...

Erm... wow, Brad. I'll try not to sound like a gawking school girl, but don't count on it. The first thing that strikes me about this is the tone, and ...

Mmmpff... HAHAHAHA! (I swears I wrote a reply to this, the other day. Drat disappearing notas. Oh well.) It's beautiful, Grif. I laughed so hard, it almost made me cry. ...